You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university •explain why you should receive the scholarship

#scholarship #program #study #university #course #•explain #•say

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in regard to obtaining some more knowledge about the available courses. As I am keen on joining your scholarship programme. The course I am quite indulged about is your Baking and Pastry Arts Management.

Additionally

this

type of skill plan is usually not available at every university which is one of the reasons I got more attracted towards it and I have always wished to be a professional Pastry chef.

Although

I have seen a lot of pictures online I am still not that aware of what your institute offers . The only major information that I was able to attain was the sports building, housing and Student Association. And I was hoping if can provide more information regarding

this

. I think I am a highly viable candidate for

this

scholarship as I have a really good academic record.

In addition

, I have won a lot of baking competitions and I was the captain of the school's swimming team.

Moreover

, all my teachers and my mentors have good things to say about me. I believe that you will make the right decision and I hope to hear back a favourable answer. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Sonam Mehra

Submitted by sonammehra2804 on Wed Mar 15 2023

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