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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates three different age
groups
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 of the
population
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 of Italy and
Yemen
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 in 2000 and predictions for 2050. These three
groups
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 are respectively, zero to fourteen
years
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 old, fifteen to fifty-nine and sixty and above. 
Overall
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, Italian citizens are more elderly than
Yemen
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.
Moreover
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, even with the anticipation the majority of the Italian
population
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 has between fifteen and fifty-nine
years
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 old.
While
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 the
Yemen
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population
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 changed throughout the
years
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, having in the beginning 50,1% of children in 2000 and in 2050 having the percentage of middle age people supersede the infant group rate in 2050. It is projected that the
population
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 of elderly citizens above sixty
years
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 old will almost double in 2050 in the European country,
hence
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, the younger
groups
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 will decrease.
On the other hand
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,
Yemen
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 forecast that the only percentage slump is the kids.
Whereas
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 the other two older
groups
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 reveal an upward trend. In conclusion, both populations are getting older, notwithstanding, the Italian
population
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 will be older than the
Yemen
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 citizens.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, population, yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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