The government intends to ban smoking in public areas. Some people say that it is a good idea, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, smoking is one of the most popular things around the world, and most countries try to decrease it, especially in public areas. Some
people
believe that
this
is not needed for society
whereas
others really want to have
laws
to stop smoking in public areas. Personally, I am in the favour of the latter view. Convincing arguments can be made that many
people
know how worse results in the body when you
smoke
regularly. Unfortunately, they mostly do not stop smoking because it contains addictive substances.
Moreover
, when
people
smoke
repeatedly for a long time,
this
suffers human's lung and mental health.
Then
, most of them can not stop smoking because the
smoke
already has affected their brain.
For example
, forty per cent of young adults
smoke
five to nine times every day in Mongolia
according to
National Statistical Union.
As a result
, the average age of men, who
smoke
every day, is around 61, and it is 5 to 7 years less than men who do not
smoke
.
On the other hand
, we do not need harsh
laws
or regulations to ban smoking in areas which are close to other
people
because it depends on human consciousness. If someone does not really want to suffer own or other
people
's health, they have a chance in order to control the behaviour where they should
smoke
. In Belgium,
for instance
, there are not any sentence to the point where they need to
smoke
, and nobody
smoke
Change the verb form
smokes
show examples
around public
according to
backpacker Mr James Ronald, in 2019.
To sum up
, few
people
think that nations do not need to prepare
laws
related to smoking.
However
, it is time to start using
laws
against public smoking in order to protect our families, especially children.
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