the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables under

shows

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show

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data about the

earth

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earth's

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nation and dispersion from 1950 to 2000, with an approx of the condition until 2050. Briefly the data by choosing and

illustrate

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illustrating

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the foundation features and make confrontations where

relationship

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the relationship

a relationship

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it can be seen that

world

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the world

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population will

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apply

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increas

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increase

increased

surge, so many areas provide that information. Asia countries ever have

been

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apply

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many humans because that area involves the most humans of states

Also

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tables

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the tables

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are

seing

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seeing

Asia region main area in

this

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increase.

Other

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area is

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Africa

which

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where

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those people have low educational

level

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levels

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this

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apply

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situation

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a situation

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to impact

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inhabitants

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the inhabitants

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world

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the world

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. On the one

hand

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world population

hade

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had

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been 2.5

billions

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billion

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in 1950, but there was

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a significantly

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significantly

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significant

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increase since 2000

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apply

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which

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when

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this

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number

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is 6

billions

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billion

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contrast

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the researchers

are

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investigated

this

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sitiation

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situation

and

decide

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decided

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populations

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population

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used to be 9

billions

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billion

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in 2050.

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hand

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,hand

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another research gives information about which countries have

portion

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a portion

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the situation. Africa was rated to 9

percent

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per cent

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in 1950 that

number

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gradually rapid so 2000 and 2050 13%,

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and 20

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% respectively. Asia

regian

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region

there was big percentage at the table,

while

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in 1950

this

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number

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been

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was

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56% but next decade a gradual climb to 60% ,

latter

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later

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a sudden decrease to 59%.

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Europe has

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a significantly

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significantly

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significant

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number

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apply

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the table, in 1950

percentage

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the percentage

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had been 22%, another time 12%,

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and 7

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% respectively.

The

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apply

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Latin America, North America and

Ocenia

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Oceania

have

smallest

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the smallest

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portion

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of avarage

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avarage

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average

each

countries

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country

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will be

same

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the same

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rate.

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Mar 16, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

249 words

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the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

With the increase in computer use, many people feel that school do not need to put the emphasis that they used to on basic handwriting skills or mathematics skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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