Some people hold that we should spend a large amount of time and money on the protection of wild animals. Some people argue that they should be spent on human populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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for spending
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to spend
time
on preserving wild animals, others believe that human populations are more pivotal. I agree that it is wiser for Use synonyms
people
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time
to human beings because of some reasons.
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Firstly
, there are many social problems in society that must be overcome. In Linking Words
this
modern era, many folks in certain areas still suffer from poverty, famine and water crisis. public should pay attention to those by donating their capital to charity organizations or participating in social events to Linking Words
give
positive effects on them. Verb problem
have
For example
, in Africa, many children deal with hunger which can lead them to have many health problems Linking Words
such
as diarrhoea, stunting, and even death. Linking Words
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happens
continues, a particular community will lose their young generation from Verb problem
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Secondly
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people
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time
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education
. Use synonyms
People
with better literacy might gain the best quality of life. By giving Use synonyms
time
to teach some uneducated Use synonyms
people
, society can avoid them suffering from stupidness. Use synonyms
For instance
, the government can provide many scholarships for those who cannot afford to reach higher Linking Words
education
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money
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Therefore
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people
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, it might Use synonyms
easier
for them to get a better job. Add a missing verb
be easier
Hence
, they can meet their needs and not be a burden to the country.
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To sum up
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although
protecting wild animals is essential for natural life, it is far more significant for Linking Words
people
to spend their Use synonyms
money
on human beings because it can solve many serious problems and increase higher Use synonyms
education
on human populations.Use synonyms
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coherence and cohesion
In the introduction, clearly state your position on the given topic and give a brief overview of the reasons you will discuss in the body paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
Support your arguments with more specific examples and elaborate on how allocating resources to human populations can solve the social problems mentioned.
coherence and cohesion
Include a stronger conclusion that summarizes your main points and restates your position on the topic.
task response
Make sure to address all parts of the prompt and provide a more balanced discussion of both sides of the argument.