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the chart below shows the proportion of british students at one university in england

the chart below shows the proportion of british students at one university in england
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A glance at the two charts provided reveals the percentage of
british
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student
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students
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 who spoke other
languages
 apart from
english
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English
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 at one particular university in 2000 and 2010.during these years most students
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 a tendency to speak other
languages
.
According to
 the charts,the percentage of
student
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students
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 in 2000 and 2010 who could not speak another
further
 language were 20% and 10% respectively.
In addition
,the proportion of students who were able to speak two other
languages
 and one another
languages
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language
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 in 2000 has slightly increased in 2010.
In both
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 groups have seen
5
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a 5
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percent
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per cent
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grow
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 in their pattern.
student
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a student
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 who spoke Germany
,
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also
 has remained in 10
percent
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per cent
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 in 2 decades.Meanwhile
french
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the french
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 language had marginally decreased from 15% in 2000 to 10%
in2010
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in 2010
.Another
further
 point that
highlighted
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 by the figure is that,the percentage of
student
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students
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 in the university who
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choose
choosed
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chose
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spanish
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Spanish
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 as a second language was
biggest
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the biggest
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 portion during these years with 30% in 2000 and 35% in 2010
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words student, languages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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