Some people think that only the goverment can make significant changes in society while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, it is commonly believed that only the
government
can make global changes in society,
while
some people think that each person can make a huge impact
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our world. Personally, I would say that rules written by the
government
are more valuable than actions made by individuals.
This
essay will discuss both of these thoughts and include some examples. On the one hand, the
government
creates laws to make people's lives better. Most of the laws were aimed to increase the wealth and level of happiness of each resident in a country.
Furthermore
, the
government
is a controlling institution which able to predict and tackle problems in society.
For instance
, the New Zealand
government
published a law that forbids selling cigarettes to customers who were born after 2013.
This
decision completely change
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with young smokers and whole health issues caused by cigarettes.
On the other hand
, individuals think only about their own profit and sometimes forget about others.
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number of people are following celebrities and don't have personal opinions about some aspects of life and just replicate
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behavior
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and civil position of
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favorite
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influencers.
For example
, Elon Musk`s fan base has wrong imaginations about
history
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the history
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and even
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war because of
incorrect
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political views of
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and rich individual Elon Musk.
To sum up
, I would say that I completely share the opinion that governments make more influence than a single person.
Also
, in my
opinion
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acts made by the
government
are more useful and were made with good intentions.
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