You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two charts depict
rural
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the rural
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share
of
poverty
during the decade-long period 1993-2002, and the comparative spread in rural vis-à-vis urban areas, specifically in the terminal year 2002. As per the pie chart,
while
rural areas
share
76% of
poverty
, the urban
share
is only 24%. That means the rural populace is thrice as likely to be poor as
urban
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the urban
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population.
This
huge gap is,
however
, not evenly spread across major regions of the world, as shown by the bar graph. In three major regions of the world, namely
Middle
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the Middle
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East & North Africa, South Asia and sub-Saharan Africa, there is a marginal reduction in
rural
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the rural
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share
of
poverty
during
this
10-year period.
On the contrary
, there is a substantial increase in
poverty
during
this
period in Europe and Central Asia. There is little change in East Asia & Pacific, where rural
poverty
has a whopping 90%
share
. An
honorable
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exception is North America & Caribbean, where the rural
share
was always low but has
further
gone down to just 40%.
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