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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.

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In
this
 era of globalisation, the
use
 of
drugs
 has become popular
especially
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 in
medical
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 industry.
Due to
this
,
huge
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 number of teenagers are taking
drug
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drugs
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 both legal
or
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 illegal
in
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at
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their
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 early
ege
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age
edge
. Other parties think that family members are the major
contribution
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of
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drug
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 consumption rate among junior citizens.
Thus
,
this
 essay will
further
 elaborate
the
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 reasons and effects of widespread
drug
use
 by young
people
 in today's community. In regard to the issue, the major causes
is
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influence
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 by their surrounding. Since there
is
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 no age restrictions
in
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on
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 many social
platform
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platforms
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 and poor monitoring from family these days, teenager find
drugs
are
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interesting to
be play
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 with.
For example
, there is a lot of
drug
 products being
display
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in
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on
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 television,
movies
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in movies
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 and
advertisement
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in advertisement
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,
influence
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influencing
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 young
people
 to take part in
drug
 activities without knowing the negative effect on them in the future.
Thus
, paying attention
on
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to
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 our kid's activities can be helpful to mitigate
this
 problem.
On the other hand
, there are many
impact
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impacts
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 of
drugs
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drug
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 consumption on teenagers. As we all know,
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the drug
a drug
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drug
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drugs
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 can be beneficial and
also
 dreadful to our
body
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bodies
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 or in
worse
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the worse
a worse
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situation
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situations
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 might cause death.
Youngster
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Youngsters
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 tend to ruin their personal life and education.
For instance
, they easy to get
fatigue
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 and
unable
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are unable
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 to score higher marks in
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the examination
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examination
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.
Moreover
, studies show that
drug
use
 increases your risk of mental health issues
such
 as anxiety, depression and psychosis.
People
 with mental health issues
also
 have a higher rate of
drug
use
 problems. In the nutshell,
drugs
 indeed help us in many ways.
However
,
youngster
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 today are very lack
of
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drugs
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drug
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 exposure.
Therefore
, the best approaches are to educate
people
 about
it's
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its
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 damaging effect and
thus
 for the government to implement
a
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full control on
drug
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drugs
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 either taken in
the
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hospitals or for media purposes.
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