People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.

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this

era of globalisation, the

use

of

drugs

has become popular

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in

medical

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industry.

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this

,

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number of teenagers are taking

drug

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drugs

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both legal

or

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illegal

in

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their

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early

ege

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age

edge

. Other parties think that family members are the major

contribution

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of

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drug

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consumption rate among junior citizens.

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,

this

essay will

further

elaborate

the

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reasons and effects of widespread

drug

use

by young

people

in today's community. In regard to the issue, the major causes

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influence

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by their surrounding. Since there

is

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no age restrictions

in

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many social

platform

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and poor monitoring from family these days, teenager find

drugs

are

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interesting to

be play

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with.

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, there is a lot of

drug

products being

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in

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television,

movies

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and

advertisement

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,

influence

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young

people

to take part in

drug

activities without knowing the negative effect on them in the future.

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, paying attention

on

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our kid's activities can be helpful to mitigate

this

problem.

On the other hand

, there are many

impact

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of

drugs

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consumption on teenagers. As we all know,

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the drug

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drug

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drugs

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can be beneficial and

also

dreadful to our

body

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or in

worse

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situation

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might cause death.

Youngster

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tend to ruin their personal life and education.

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fatigue

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and

unable

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to score higher marks in

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the examination

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examination

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.

Moreover

, studies show that

drug

use

increases your risk of mental health issues

such

as anxiety, depression and psychosis.

People

with mental health issues

also

have a higher rate of

drug

use

problems. In the nutshell,

drugs

indeed help us in many ways.

However

,

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today are very lack

of

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apply

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drugs

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exposure.

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, the best approaches are to educate

people

about

it's

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damaging effect and

thus

for the government to implement

a

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full control on

drug

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drugs

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either taken in

the

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hospitals or for media purposes.