This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011
This
bar chart illustrates the ratio of house ownership and the rental rate in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the household in rented accommodation kept decreasing from 1918 to 2001, from 78 per
cent
to 32 per
cent
. Meanwhile, the percentage of
households
owned kept increasing from 1981 to 2001, from 22 per
cent
to 69 per
cent
. It is
also
worth mentioning that in the
last
decade of the survey, percentages of
households
in rented turned slightly up and
households
in owned dropped a little down. In 1918, there were 22 per
cent
of residents bought their own house,
in contrast
, there were almost 2.5 times of people who rented houses. When it came to 1971,
households
owned and rented both has half share in the accommodation.
At the end
of the survey year, there were 65 per
cent
of people in England and Wales lived in their own houses, and only half of the residents which were 35 per
cent
lived in rented properties.
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