This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011
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This
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bar chart illustrates the ratio of house ownership and the rental rate in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011.
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, the household in rented accommodation kept decreasing from 1918 to 2001, from 78 per
cent
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to 32 per
cent
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. Meanwhile, the percentage of
households
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owned kept increasing from 1981 to 2001, from 22 per
cent
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to 69 per
cent
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. It is
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worth mentioning that in the
last
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decade of the survey, percentages of
households
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in rented turned slightly up and
households
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in owned dropped a little down. In 1918, there were 22 per
cent
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of residents bought their own house,
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, there were almost 2.5 times of people who rented houses. When it came to 1971,
households
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owned and rented both has half share in the accommodation.
At the end
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of the survey year, there were 65 per
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of people in England and Wales lived in their own houses, and only half of the residents which were 35 per
cent
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lived in rented properties.
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