The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Looking at the chart below, it's possible to get an idea concerning downloading from the internet, three different computer packages, namely:
Activex
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, Java and Net, over five weeks. Giving an overview it's evident see from the chart that, the majority of users, it's for the software called
Activex
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,
while
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on the other hand
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, the minority is always for the system Net. In detail, starting from the first week, we found
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use of 70 people related to
Activex
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, 45 for Java, which is always between the other two, or rather, neither less nor more, and 32 people for the net. Clearly, in the following weeks, as the bar chart illustrates,
Activex
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and Java depict an increase, whilst, the other software presents a decline for weeks 2 and 3;
Then
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, it starts its process of growth.
To conclude
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, with what has already been analysed and compared( in detail), it's relevant to highlight and admit that, people show a higher preference for the use of the
Activex
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computer package.
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