Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In

this

period of technology, one of the brilliant invention made by human

are

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computers

. Some

individual

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argued that

computers

are the most crucial device for the

last

ten decades.

From

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my opinion, I agreed with the point aforementioned above because

computers

increase productivity and

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are able

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able

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ability

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to store

massive

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a massive

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amount

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of data.

This

essay will

further

elaborate my view and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. Supporting my agreement

to

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the given statement,

i

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firmly believe that

computers

make our jobs much faster and boost our productivity. Since there are many features in

computers

, people absolutely can do anything.

For example

, when people complete their

task

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tasks

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using software like word, excel or

powerpoint

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PowerPoint

in

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their

computers

, it will make

much

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easier for them to create, edit, delete or share

the

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documents

to

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peers.

Thus

, not like other traditional methods,

computers

save time and create a

convenience

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working environment. Explaining some of

the

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another

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supporting

point

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in

favor

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this

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statement is the invention of

computers

help

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in keeping vast amounts of

informations

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information

pieces of information

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which can be retrieved in the future.

For instance

, a computer system

have

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enough storage capacity as

they

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can store hundreds or thousands of documents, videos,

audios

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audio

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or pictures.

Therefore

,

computers

save trees since it reduces paper requirements as a medium of storage information. In the nutshell,

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the computer

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computer

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computers

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provided a lot of

benefit

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benefits

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on

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human development in

increase

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productivity

as well as

act

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as

a

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apply

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storage

device

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devices

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.

Thus

, the statement

mentiond

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mentioned

by some people about

it's

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importance

are

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absolutely true and

futher

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further

improvement in

this

technology are needed.