the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of families’ salary spending during a week in a society in 1968 and 2018. It is important to note that in 1968 people spent most of their income buying food.
In 1968 the proportion of buying food stood at 35% in comparison, with fuel and power was just above 5% in the same
moreover
it is noticeable that household Linking Words
goods
, personal Use synonyms
goods
and transport stood at just under 10% Use synonyms
in contrast
with housing and clothing and footwear that were at 10% it shows that communities allocated their weekly money on food and after that clothing and footwear and housing ware the first stuff that they bought.
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Also
in 2018, the folk spent their income average on leisure activities approximately 22% Linking Words
while
fuel and power were just under 5% Linking Words
also
personal Linking Words
goods
had the same rates as fuel and power at the same time. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, housing was the second activity that people paid for it that was just under 20% and at the Linking Words
last
but not least it is important to say that the household Linking Words
goods
rate did not change in both these years.Use synonyms
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