The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world

population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections

for 2050.
This
bar chart depicts the ratio of the total global
population
of four nations in 1950 and 2002 , and projections for 2050 . It is clear from the graph that Chania had the highest
percentage
of
population
compared to the other countries in 1950 and 2002.
According to
what is shown, the
percentage
of the
population
in India was 15% in 1950 , and the ratio
had
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increased by approximately 5% in 2002 . and the projection
percentage
will reach slightly under 20 per cent in 2050. The
population
of China accounts for around 23% of the total global
percentage
in 1950 ,after ,that it decreased gradually until reached exactly 20% in 2002.
Moreover
, the projection number of China will decline noticeably by 5% in 2050 . In the united
states
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the percentages made up around 7% in 1950 , and decreased gradually until reached 5% in 2002, and will remain stable in 2050 . Japan's
population
's
percentage
was less than 5% in 1950 and will decrease
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2050
at
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around 1% in 2050.
To sum up
, we could say that Japan had the least
percentage
compared to the three countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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