in some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. what are the reasons? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the problems that happen in certain countries is a partner that plans to postpone having a
child
in early marriage. The reason is due to
a lot of newly married couple's
Change noun form
couples
thinking
that being conscious about the readiness to be parents is more significant than raising a baby without preparation. In order to try to create better principles in taking care of their Replace the word
think
children
. Certainly, there will be more advantages.
The disadvantage in this
case without background knowledge about parenting will become a big matter which causes mental issues for them as new parents. For example
, both a new mother and father will easily get emotional due to
the child
always crying nonstop. Since they do not understand well the trick or treatment that fits their babies. Therefore
, rather than feeling rushed, it is better to make a good future plan for the children
as well as
avoid harming their self-mental.
The advantage is thorough preparation from the financial aspect. As a parent raising a child
needs a lot of money to raise them well. For instance
, the daily need for children
's necessities such
as milk, toys, and cloth instead
of that the more they grow up then
the greater the cost. Hence
, having a child
in late life is a wise decision to prevent the lack of financial
The conclusion is that having a child
in early marriage without good preparation could attack the mental health of the new parent. In the meantime, having a child
late in life is not a big deal and having quiet time to prepare the finances first. Thus
, there will be more advantages by
having a happy family life without Change preposition
to
less
finances Change the quantifier
fewer
due to
having children
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