Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

One of the most controversial issues around the world is
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the economic
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economic
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economy
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in each country.Meanwhile many
governments
believe advancement in
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is the most important
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.But some opponents think there are many factors that are as important as
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.I partially agree with both groups and I will explain more in detail with some examples. On the one hand,
governments
are wondering to improve the economical condition and there
are
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stiff competition between authorities in
countries
around the world to
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this
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.The reason is that
,
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advancement
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advancements
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in
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help
governments
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make
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them strong.
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,just with
gain
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part
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of
countries
they can cope with poverty and have
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society
.
For instance
,most of the developed and rich
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such
as the USA,Canada and
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kingdom could
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in many areas
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because
they are economically strong.
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,
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have
also
numerous responsibilities toward
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citizens.They
also
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have
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to legislate rules or allocate money to
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part
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of
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to enhance the quality of
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life or
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of people in all
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of their life.
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of the most important
part
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that
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governmet
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government
governments
should pay enough attention to it because
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and strong
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,
healthy
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people and without
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we can not
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achieve
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.Another
further
example is education.each
society
who
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consider
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to
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education can
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profit
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, not only in innovation and science but
also
in economics.
To sum up
,
governments
duties should not be taken lightly in
society
and I believe just with attention
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all aspects
eqully
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equally
we can
gain
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