Parents are the people who live with us for long time. In your opinion, what are the qualities of good parents?

We can'
t
choose them, but we leave one another for a long time. So, we must look up to each other and have their back, too. They are our parents and we have to respect them. I mean we have to be a close-knit family. In my opinion, the first quality that our parents have is, they have your back on your problems
for example
if you can'
t
pass your exam they help you to be good in your lessons, not have an argument with you.
Second,
they are benevolent with you, and when you spend time with each other, feel better and give positive energy.
third,
they let you say your opinion and don'
t
interrupt you when you are speaking about something, it helps you to be a creative person. Fourth, they don'
t
judge you, they ask you about your reasons. Fifth the most important thing is to get on well with each other I mean, parents can make a close-knit family or a dysfunctional family.
Then
let you be alone sometimes and don'
t
ask you a lot in these times.
Finally
, if you make a mistake, don'
t
be anxious and let you,
also
help you fix the problem.
As a result
, all of the characteristics that are said are necessary to have a close-knit family and if you have them, you pass half of the success way. but all close-knit families don'
t
have a high level of these characteristics, so don'
t
worry, and spend time with them to improve your family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • boundaries
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