universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what eztent do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that
equal
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an equal
the equal
number
of male and female students
should attend the class
. I completely disagree with this
idea. There are two main reasons which are associated with personal desire and lack of orentation
.
First of all, I completely believe that Correct your spelling
orientation
every
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everyone
one
has their own goals. In simple terms, most of
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the
girls naturally want to study Correct article usage
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as
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number
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a school
the school
which
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where
others
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for others
on the other hand
, boys get universities' invitation
for fixing and building. Fix the agreement mistake
invitations
As a result
, students
can be qualified employees as their own desire. One
of the perfect examples of this
is President
of Meriton company. His mother pushed him to be a Correct article usage
the President
painist
, but he believed himself to be Correct your spelling
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an engineering
engineering
. Now he is Replace the word
engineer
one
of the successful
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most successful
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in
his
wants.
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he
Secondly
and even more importantly, though, universities could not start their first day of school in the twenty first
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twenty-first
of
century if they announce Change preposition
apply
equal
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an equal
the equal
number
of girls and boys in one
class
. In simple terms, male pupils rarely choose early childhood teaching. As a result
, some of
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new
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the new
students
can not start their lesson
on time. Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
One
of the petfect
examples of Correct your spelling
perfect
this
is Mongolian
University of Technology. Two decades before Mongolian government decided equal Correct article usage
the Mongolian
gender
of new Correct article usage
the gender
students
in automative
engineering Correct your spelling
automotive
class
. 20 male attendees already have chosen the Fix the agreement mistake
classes
class
but only 2 female mentees had booked the lesson. Regarding Correct article usage
the Parliament
Parliament
announcement boys could not start their subject on time Add a comma
,Parliament
untill
President banned it.
By way of conclusion, I once again restate my view that Correct your spelling
until
equal
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an equal
the equal
number
of girl
and Fix the agreement mistake
girls
boy
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boys
students
can not attend in
every single subject. Change preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite