In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In my opinion, old
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should take
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of by nurses or
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while
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not all
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could able to do so, Who really need
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from the
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.Let us discuss the reason and my perspective towards
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support
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with, middle-class
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compared to other well-settled and wealthy background
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, either caretakers or hire home nurses which is really not affordable for them.
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the fact that the financial potential of one varies from another.Even though the
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schemes helped them to get retirement funds,
government
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-aided insurance claims to
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their illness, CPF or another kind of entitlement especially for elderly
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to take
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of themself, it is not really good enough to
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elderly
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need
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from their family to look after them at home on sick days.Certainly, younger members of the family must need to go to work to survive and handle day-to-day wages.
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, one of my neighbour's father was 65 years old and is a retired teacher suffers from paralysis, he must need a person to be with him to do the dressing and other kinds of medical needs too,the bitter part is they bring him to the old-age home to take
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which is really affordable by the middle-class family.
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my essay with a strong prospect of elderly
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getting
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from the
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to fulfil their medical needs
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other essential need including caretaking.I
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suggest that the
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can come up with new schemes to cover routine medical check-ups, and nutrition-rich food free of cost and
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fully subsidising nursing
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will be a bigger step towards them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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