The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

The diagram depicts the manufacturing process of making

sugar

.

Overall

,It is a linear process and it

is consists

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of seven stages beginning with growing and

end

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up with drying and cooling. In the first stage,

Sugar

cane is growing

almost

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for almost

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12-18 months after that it is harvested and after

that

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it is carried to a truck as a raw material.

Then

,It is crushed for taking juice .After collecting juice it is

then

carried to a limestone filter for

purify

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.Next,The juice

undergo

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undergoes

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through Evaporator to form

syrup

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a syrup

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.

Then

,It is carried to a centrifuge for

seperation

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separation

separating

sugar

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of sugar

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from syrup.

Finally

,

sugar

goes through

drying

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a drying

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and cooling pot where

sugar

is ready for packaging.