The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
This
graph provides data on how many tourists visited a Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The Y-axis shows numbers in millions (m), whereas
the X-axis shows the years from 2010 until 2017.
To begin
with, an overall
analysis of the information illustrates important observations, which are, throughout the years, the total number of visitors has been steadily increasing, starting with 1 million in 2010 and plateauing between 2015 and 2016, before reaching 3.5 in 2017.
However
, it is further
categorized into two groups. The first one is visitors who stayed on an island which was 1.5 m in 2017. The second group is visitors who stayed on cruise ships which were
2 m in 2017.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
furthermore
, the two groups crossed each other to have the same number of tourists somewhere in the middle of 2015. An evaluation of this
data highlights the increased use of cruise ships, which, in my opinion, suggest the shortage of hotel on the island.Submitted by m-not21 on
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