Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dresscode. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

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era of technology, some educational institutions are quite strict about its

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other schools seem very casual in

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of their

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uniforms increase safety

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people with financial issues find it very hard

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the rules.

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benefits and drawbacks of pupils having a

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. The first and foremost benefit of wearing

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increase safety among

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attires

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, they can

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from a distance based on their tie colour, shoes and name tag.

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, someone can be easily identified whether he or she is a member of particular

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or not. Other than that, during a trip day, pupils can be easily spotted among crowds thanks to their

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, it will reduce the chance of getting kidnapped or

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by criminals as

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have an eye on them.

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, explaining some of the drawbacks of

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issue are

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with limited financial abilities cannot afford to buy

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uniforms. Since their parents

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need to consider other expenses

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as annual education fees, necessities and rental fees, they find it hard to buy a complete outfit for their

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ones.

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school

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can be uncomfortable sometimes especially when the temperatures are warm outside. Some

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institutions

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required

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to wear suits or jackets which are not cosy as t-shirts or shorts.

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, it shows

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of freedom among

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. In the nutshell, despite

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safety rates and

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, other parties with low income

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to enjoy its benefits. Hopefully, the government will take

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appropriate actions to mitigate

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problem in the future.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dresscode. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Some people think that companies and individuals should pay to clear up the pollution they produce and that the government should not pay for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

POPULATION: The number of people who decide not to have children has increased greatly Do you think this is a positive or negative development