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You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. Describe what the course is. Explain how it will benefit the company. Suggest how to arrange time for it.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
 letter to enrol in a master of computer application course at oxford university which would be beneficial for the company's productivity. I am Eva Smith, working as an account manager in your company.
Besides
this
, I want to take permission to take admitted to the master of computer application. It is a 1-year course and I will learn some new techniques and features to present the data effectively.
Furthermore
, when I will attend the classes of the course
then
 I learn new techniques
as well as
 upgrade my knowledge related to computer work. As It will help to enhance my position in the organization. All in all, I will manage my work and study easily because I attend classes 3 days a week.
In addition
 on that day, the professor provides practical techniques and uses way throughout the presentation. In the end, I will cover that day's work with my assistant
then
 the company can not face any difficulties related to the account data association. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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