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Countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other type of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree

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The gap between wealthy and unrich regions is a major problem in the modern world.If the poor nation gets
funds
 from developed
money
 not solve the
people
's development unless they have an
education
. In
this
 paragraph we discuss it. Admittedly, wealthy
countries
 donate
money
 to poor
countries
. They are using the
funds
 for their food and water
instead
 of
education
.
Funds
 Are useful in daily life activities.
Moreover
, Poor
countries
 do not have accommodation for their
people
 .So they spend some amount of
money
 on life.
For example
, America every year gives
funds
 to Sri Lanka for environmental collapses
such
 as flooding and tsunami. But that nation is still poor . so must need some changes in the giving system. The best option is educational development for their country's
people
.
Hence
 , Rich
countries
 must provide
education
instead
 of wealth .If they are given an
education
then
people
's lifestyles will be changed. The teaching enhanced the community of
people
's life.
For example
 , the UK government announced free
education
 for all foreign poor
countries
. Most of the rural students are willing to join
this
 scheme. They will develop their knowledge and study and they will be getting a bright future. It is a better way to solve the poverty problem in undeveloped regions. In conclusion, I reiterate that
money
 does not bring
people
 development. The teaching is most powerful for all
countries
 getting their
people
 wealth. In my point of view , developing
countries
 must give
education
 to poor nations not only financially.
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