Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.

The revolution of technology in recent times drove

people

to consider some subjects to be irrelevant to the current needs of the world. One of the

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which is under heavy criticism is

history

.

While

some

preceive

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perceive

receive

that

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of

history

keeps

people

connected to their culture

while

some believe that it is not the most intriguing and reliable

subject

. Most of the research programs are based on the data recorded in the past which is

further

enhanced by applying technology which leads to incredible discoveries.

For example

, the masterpiece 'Book of medicine' written by a

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scientist Avicenna created an impetus for the knowledge of

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biological science to be

further

developed.

Furthermore

,

people

also

believe that

study

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of

history

brings

masses

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closer to realise their roots and emboldens their cultural heritage. Ever since the famous TV show 'Vikings' was broadcasted on

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television, the Nordic communities have started to adhere to their roots.

Although

there are upsides

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studying

history

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some believe there are far more downsides. Some believe that the

study

of

history

is extremely boring and hard to focus

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Many school students may end up losing their interest in education which eventually creates a negative impact on

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society.

In addition

to that,

people

often use

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phrase '

History

will glorify hunters until the lion learns to write' to voice their concerns that the

study

of

history

which is available to us is corrupted

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morphed by those in power in the past which makes it an unreliable

subject

. In conclusion, both sides have genuine reasoning behind their opinions on whether

history

should be taught or not. Some find that

history

is so boring that it may discourage school children from education

while

others state that it helps in

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of human civilisation.

However

, I strongly believe that

history

is an important

subject

which can help us in carrying forward

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human heritage and knowledge.