Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.

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The revolution of technology in recent times drove
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to consider some subjects to be irrelevant to the current needs of the world. One of the
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which is under heavy criticism is
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some
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perceive
receive
that
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study
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the study
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of
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keeps
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connected to their culture
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some believe that it is not the most intriguing and reliable
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. Most of the research programs are based on the data recorded in the past which is
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enhanced by applying technology which leads to incredible discoveries.
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, the masterpiece 'Book of medicine' written by a
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scientist Avicenna created an impetus for the knowledge of
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biological science to be
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developed.
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,
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also
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believe that
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study
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the study
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of
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brings
masses
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closer to realise their roots and emboldens their cultural heritage. Ever since the famous TV show 'Vikings' was broadcasted on
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television, the Nordic communities have started to adhere to their roots.
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there are upsides
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studying
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some believe there are far more downsides. Some believe that the
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of
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is extremely boring and hard to focus
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Many school students may end up losing their interest in education which eventually creates a negative impact on
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society.
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to that,
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often use
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phrase '
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will glorify hunters until the lion learns to write' to voice their concerns that the
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of
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which is available to us is corrupted
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morphed by those in power in the past which makes it an unreliable
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. In conclusion, both sides have genuine reasoning behind their opinions on whether
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should be taught or not. Some find that
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is so boring that it may discourage school children from education
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others state that it helps in
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the advancement
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of human civilisation.
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, I strongly believe that
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is an important
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which can help us in carrying forward
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human heritage and knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anachronistic
  • cultural heritage
  • perspective
  • historical context
  • societal norms
  • contemporary
  • evolution
  • progress
  • modern advancements
  • conflicts
  • tensions
  • academic
  • practical skills
  • subjective
  • victors
  • marginalized groups
  • dwelling on the past
  • irrelevant
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