The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012
The line graph illustrates the changing rates of crime in the inner city from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the
burglary
dropped significantly over the period,
whereas
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car
theft
and the
robbery
remain stable. It can be clearly seen that
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burglary
accounted for almost 3500 incidents in 2003,
while
the
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car
theft
and the
robbery
stood at under 3000 occurrences.
In addition
,
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burglary
reached a peak at about 3800 happenings in 2004, and
then
it decreased sharply to over 1000
cases
in the following four years.
However
,
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car
theft
had the same trend, and it took over
the
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burglary
in mid-2006. By 2012, the
burglary
had levelled off to around 1400 incidents, and
the
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car
theft
had increased slowly
at
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about 2800
cases
. For the
robbery
case, it stood at over 500
cases
at the first of the year.
Moreover
, by 2012,
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robbery
had remained stable in the same
cases
as
the
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in the
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first period.
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