The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012
The line graph illustrates the changing rates of crime in the inner city from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the Linking Words
burglary
dropped significantly over the period, Use synonyms
whereas
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the
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apply
car
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theft
and the Use synonyms
robbery
remain stable.
It can be clearly seen that Use synonyms
the
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apply
burglary
accounted for almost 3500 incidents in 2003, Use synonyms
while
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the
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apply
car
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theft
and the Use synonyms
robbery
stood at under 3000 occurrences. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
the
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apply
burglary
reached a peak at about 3800 happenings in 2004, and Use synonyms
then
it decreased sharply to over 1000 Linking Words
cases
in the following four years. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
the
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apply
car
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theft
had the same trend, and it took over Use synonyms
the
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apply
burglary
in mid-2006. By 2012, the Use synonyms
burglary
had levelled off to around 1400 incidents, and Use synonyms
the
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apply
car
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theft
had increased slowly Use synonyms
at
about 2800 Change preposition
to
cases
.
For the Use synonyms
robbery
case, it stood at over 500 Use synonyms
cases
at the first of the year. Use synonyms
Moreover
, by 2012, Linking Words
the
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apply
robbery
had remained stable in the same Use synonyms
cases
as Use synonyms
the
first period.Change preposition
in the
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