News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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on television and in
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newspaper
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. From my point of view,
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are able to express deep meanings than
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pictures
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with,
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help us to understand the meaning of the topics for a variety of reasons.
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, there is a picture which is related to a lady who is on the ground. What has happened? Nobody knows it without
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process of the actions.
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, a journalist always presents the news on television, but the
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are shown on the screen.
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, many people think that we can understand
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this
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news
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they are looking at the screen.
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but not least, if we do not use
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more, a newspaper or a book will look like a comic book.
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the reason why we write more than we put
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the novel. Turning to the other side of the argument, a picture needs to improve sufficiently in order to improve the whole context.
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, a picture of Michael Jordan, which has been taken at the right moment, has shown us how wonderful was the
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shot in the NBA final. In conclusion, the
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should be posted in the newspaper and on television, but
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are going to be a sword for a writer and a journalist. In
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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