Some feel that movies and TV shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some

people

believe that

movies

and

shows are a good

way

to study

history

regardless of their historical efficiency at times. I think

that is

way

of studying

history

, but it depends on the significant story. On the one hand, some

people

think that

movies

and

shows are a source to get knowledge of

history

. These days

shows and

movies

are the most effective

way

to film viewers because of various

stories

, emotional séance and good play of actors. They engage more audiences than radio, magazines, books, etc.

According to

research,

people

worldwide spend more time on Netflix and HBO than the number of a book downloaded and bought between 10 years.

Thus

people

prefer more watch

shows and

movies

in their leisure time

instead

of reading a book, overthinking, and debating with other

people

On the other hand

, lack of historical

accuracy

is an important thing to expressing a historical happening. In the past decades, many directors have tried to make numerous historical

movies

However

, many of these

movies

do not have

accuracy

in telling historical

stories

of old events or important parts of

history

. So,

accuracy

in telling important

history

is a vital problem.

For instance

, there are many types of a movie about the war the second with different

stories

, and some of them have different historical

stories

. If the change is in the main part of a story, it will be bad happen, and misrepresenting the

history

cause to misunderstanding a lesson of

history

, and these are crucial for every audience. In conclusion,

shows and

movies

are a good

way

to represent historical

stories

However

accuracy

in the main story is vital for every

history

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