You are working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in an emergency. Write a letter to your friend. Apologies for leaving like this. Explain what happened. Tell them what you are going to miss about working.

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Dear John, Hope

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letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I'm writing

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letter to inform you that I have come back to my country to settle my family's crisis.

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, I tell so sorry for leaving the country without giving any information related to the situation. I wanted to meet with you before leaving the nation because of my busy schedule I never inform you. Speaking to which,

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night my mother called me and tell the situation of my father. He is hospitalized and his condition is very critical.

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, I am the only child of my parents and I support them in that difficult circumstances. That's why I'm quitting the country in a short period. Though I'm leaving suddenly, I would like you to know that it was a pleasant time to work with you as I had a great experience in the past three years in Australia.

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, I had great learning and enhance knowledge to improve my skills which are helpful for my career. Let's stay in touch, and I hope to meet you soon. Warm wishes, Eva.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

189 words

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Government spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that government spend too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree ?

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