It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places ? What measures can be taken to ensure this issue

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tourism is
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day by day
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generates income for a country, it
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that
tourists
had a negative impact on the tourist spots, which is majorly
due to
the behaviour of people who visit there.I deem that there are many reasons for behaving
bad
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by the
tourists
such
as lack of knowledge, fake
agents
and so on.
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there are some measures that help to cope
from
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this
problem in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, owning to several reasons that emphasise
on
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, the bad behaviour of
tourists
at a place. Primarily, they didn't have proper knowledge
or
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rule and regulations about
tourist
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the tourist
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attraction
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attractions
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.To elaborate,
due to
fake
agents
,
travelers
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didn't what to do and
not
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get proper facilities in hotels.
Afterward
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, they put out their all anger on the spots
such
as
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garbage, drinking alcohol and uncertainly, they behave badly in front of other people.
In addition
, they
also
not
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have
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acquire
guidence
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guidance
about
a religious places
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and follow their own rules.
Therefore
,
this
consequence leads to
misunderstanding
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misunderstandings
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in
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between
tourists
and common individuals of
that
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a
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particular country.
On the other hand
, there are some aspects that determine, the possible solution
of
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this
issue. To a greater extent step is that authorities have to take strict action against fake
agents
or
tourists
have to post videos of that agent or agency. So that other individuals came to know about fake
agents
.
Furthermore
,
government
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can put some
boarders
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borders
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or
pemplets
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pamphlets
on
the
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tourists
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spots in all languages.
As a result
, they can easily understand the rules and regulations.
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was
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conducted by the United Nations Census Bureau, in the USA, in 2015, a sample size of 1437 containing individuals revealed that 89 % of people were higher guider
while
travelling at any place. In order to guide correctly and help them
to
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communication
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also
.
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion that
although
there are abundant reasons for behaving badly by the
tourists
.
However
,
government
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can cope
this
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problem easily and fastest way because they all
kind
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of things like money to make new boarder or
catching
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fake
agents
.
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