Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open, and there should be no control on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media?

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Nowadays, most population of the world get the information they need from the media,

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as TVs and the internet. Most societies would prefer

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information to be completely open.

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, it is believed that the authority should restrict access to anything confidential. In

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statement and I will support my opinion with examples. First and foremost, most of the widely distributed sources on the Internet are banned by the authority, because most of the news or similar broadcast is not true, which means that many of them are written to attract individuals. The strict restriction of

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because all kinds of false accounts cause stress in people. Take a recent study in Congo as an example, the number of unreliable data releases has increased dramatically in the

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year, and

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, almost 40 per cent of the population is suffering from stress.

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, many people think that the law should not restrict the viewing of

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materials,

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to say, if they are restricted, individuals will not be able to find the materials they want through various websites or other sources on the Internet.

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some resources are viewable by parents, they are still prohibited for immatures, so it is said that parents, not the government, should restrict only their minors.

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, the authority is responsible for limiting information in the media, because parents cannot ban democratic or similar resources there.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open, and there should be no control on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media?

Fully explain your ideas

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Some Children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Student should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?