The two pie charts provide the information about the increase and decrease of the world population in a century.

The two pie charts provide the information about the increase and decrease of the world population in a century.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts provide the information about the increase and decrease of the world population in a century.
The given pie chart illustrates how the world
population
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increases and decreases from the year 1900 to 2000.
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, the two pie charts show the
population
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which dramatically increased in 1 century
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1.6 billion in 1900 to 6 billion in 2000. We can see a rapid decrement in Europe including Russia, Asia,
Africa
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, and Latin America with the Caribbean. Europe including Russia's
population
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rapidly falls from 25% to 14%, Asia steadily falls from 60% to 54%,
Africa
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slightly falls from 10% to 4%,and Latin America from 8% to 3% in the years 1900 to 2000.
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North America and others remain constant with a
population
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of 5% and 3% and in the year 1900 there is no middle East with North
Africa
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was found in the pie chart but in the year 2000 Middle East with North
Africa
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is added to with the
population
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of 6%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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