During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for this job

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Dear Mr Robinson, I am writing

this

letter with regard to the job opportunity that you mentioned

while

we are on a flight going to the Philippines,

last

March 15th. We had a great talk about your business and I was amazed at how you have grown your business in just a few years. I am looking for a new job to increase my skills in a manager position. If you happen to have an opening for that position, I would gladly like to take that offer. You mentioned that you are building a restaurant near my area, in Mandaluyong City, which happens to be near my place. It would be nice to work in an area with which I am already familiar. I have been working as an assistant manager for about 5 years. I believe that my skills improved over the years in managing a restaurant with the help of my manager. My co-workers approved of how calmly I handled the restaurant whenever we encountered problems

such

as delayed shipment of our products. I am open to new beginnings and I believe that working with you will help me mould my abilities.

This

will be a stepping stone for me for new a new environment. Thank you very much and I hope

this

letter reaches you. Yours faithfully, Rhea Emano

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