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Nowadays it is not only large companies that are able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In the modern world,
technologies
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 open new horizons, giving people an opportunity to get involved in different processes.
Film
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 production is one of the spheres, where not only large companies can participate, but almost anyone. I strongly believe that it is beneficial both for
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 specific industry and society in general. In recent years digital
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,
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 as social networks, applications and software for editing and creating videos, have made an enormous step forward. Everyone can create their own masterpiece within several days and publish it on a platform for others to judge. It definitely makes the
film
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 industry more diverse and focused not only on box-office results but
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 on more intellectual content.
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, if
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 weren’t on
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 a high level, there wouldn’t be independent studios, which deal in their movies with not profitable, but crucial topics like poverty, wars, mental illnesses etc.
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, independent
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 production influences society in a positive way. A huge number of talented people may not have an opportunity to obtain a degree in
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 sphere and,
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, don’t have a chance to work for famous corporations.
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, those who were born in the countryside often can’t afford to move to a metropolis to study or work in the
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 industry,
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, they may miss a chance to create an outstanding
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, even if they are truly talented. In
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 case, digital
technologies
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 help self-actualization. In conclusion, it is evident that the development of
technologies
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 brings many possibilities and helps to diversify the range of topics and points of view in
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-making.

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