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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology that can prevent and solve crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays , compared to the past ,
crime
 is declining
due to
 the developments in technology , which helps with any type of
crime
 , even if it is cybercrime.
This
 innovation makes government and policy able to prevent society from danger. I strongly agree with
this
 statement and in
this
 essay ,I will fully provide my point of view On the one hand , people believe that the era of technology can not have an impact on the percentage of
crime
 ,
due to
 the fact that
security
 systems can easily be hacked. These days' offenders keep discovering ways of cyber-attacks on big stock companies, in ,fact 20 per cent of them have managed it.
On the other hand
 , every type of team already has both AI and personal
security
. First of all, there are a great number of AI
security
 equipped at public places
such
 as airports, underground, bus stations, and
also
 at ATMs and department bank stores.
This
 type of facility
,
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 can protect our society from being robbed or even bullied because
this
 staff is able to notice every possible
crime
.
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example
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 if someone looks strange or suspicious , AI would search and know everything about that individual in minute details.
Additionally
 , there are no less effective
security
 organization , that consists of well-trained physically and mentally people. These days protectors are well paid because requirements are high,
firstly
 people who want to work in
this
 area have to be psychologically educated , and physically trained.
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 they are related to AI that shares data and camera view with them , so they can connect with each other easily.
To conclude
 , nowadays protection tactics are well-operated, and technology and human staff can easily protect and even predict any
crime
, because the system is sophisticated , and improved at high points.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • CCTV (Closed-Circuit Television)
  • Deterrent
  • Forensic science
  • DNA testing
  • Digital fingerprinting
  • Analytics
  • Predictive policing
  • Cybercrime
  • Encryption
  • Dark web
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Community policing
  • Public awareness
  • Law enforcement agencies
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