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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
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 bar chart illustrates the total revenue from three major exported commodities in 2000, the current year and the estimated year 2025.
Overall
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, it is apparent that Southland has earned much more money from international tourism and dairy
products
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 since 2000, compared with meat
products
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.
Furthermore
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,
this
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 trend is predicted to be continued until 2025. At present, an exponential increment can be witnessed in the amount of money gained from dairy
products
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, which increased from 7
billion
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pounds
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 in 2000 to about 10
billion
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pounds
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 up to now.
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, the figure for international travel
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 grew during the past few years, but much less significantly from approximately 8
billion
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 to 9
billion
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pounds
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.
However
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, the amount of revenue from meat
products
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 decreased by 0.5
billion
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pounds
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 over
this
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 period. Turning to the future predictions, we can clearly see that there will be an upward trend for the income from international trips, with the figure reaching around 10
billion
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pounds
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 in 2025.
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, the amounts of money earned from dairy and meat
products
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 are thought to decline in the future, ending at roughly 9.5
billion
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 and 5
billion
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pounds
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • categories
  • international tourism
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparisons
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