We can not help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It has long been a topic of numerous debates that if people are not able to help poor men all over the world, they should just be worried about their own country.

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for all mankind, I believe that we have to

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about global problems and take action if it is needed. In

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I will shed light on both aspects. On the one hand, we can not be

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for everyone. Our first

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than another one’s cousins but if I can help them both I absolutely by all

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would do my best and it would be my pleasure. But perhaps, it is hard and almost impossible to help everyone in the world.

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issues. In fact, humanity always comes beside kindness. People should always provide mutual support for their same kind no matter what and be always

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with their helping hand. Kindness and donation are the greatest value of man

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global village we are now like a family and as we care about our own folk we should do the same with our same kind.

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community. The main conclusion

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I admit that we can not help everyone, I still believe should notice other countries as well.

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