the chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airport un New York City between 1995 and 2000
The bar graph provides information on how many passengers visited three main airports in New York
city
over a 5-year period of time. The blue , yellow and grey bars Change the capitalization
City
indictate
John Correct your spelling
indicate
F.Kennedy
, La Guardia and Newark airports respectively. The X-axis illustrates Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
years
from 1995 to 2000 Correct article usage
the years
whereas
the Y-axis shows the number
of airport visitors in millions.
Number
of people Change the article
A number
The number
visited
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who visited
F.Kennedy
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F. Kennedy
had
increased gradually from 1995 up until 1997 when it peaked, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
slowly decreased in following
2 years. Correct article usage
the following
Also
, from 1999 to 2000, a
significant growth can be seen in the Remove the article
apply
number
of arrivals at the above mentioned
airport. Count of Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
peple
who visited LaGuardia had an upward trend Correct your spelling
people
continuously
over the time period.
Even though Newark showed the same at the beginning, from 1998 onwards the Replace the word
continues
amount
of visitors remained the same. LaGuardia had the highest Change the quantifier
number
number
of passengers during the time period which was around 68 million however
, Newark had the least which was about 18 million.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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