You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend, Where and why you move from there Compare your new place to old Where do u live now

Hello Tim, How are you doing? I still remember the days we had when we are in a small village 10 years ago. Hope you are engaged with your desires.

However

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, I'm writing

this

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letter to get you notified about my new place. Eventually, we can have a chat when you come here soon. I was in a small compartment in Borella for 2 years. It was an awful area with lots of noise.

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, the adjoining people used to play music all the time. That atmosphere disturbed me drastically in my studies.

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, I decided to move.

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this

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new home was surrounded by calm and quiet people who worked in

this

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city. The space of the house is humungous.

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, I can keep my all belongings very nicely here. The current house is in Malambe which is 15 kilometres away from my

last

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apartment. You can come directly by bus here. How about your place now? Please leave me a text when you are returning. Your Loving Friend, Vishva

vishvaisurangaSat Mar 18 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Relocate
Transition
Adjustment
Neighborhood
Amenities
Atmosphere
Homesickness
Community
Lifestyle
Cultural shift
Residential area
Scenery
Urban/Rural
Local cuisine
Public transport
Vibrant
Tranquil
Inviting

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