IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Environmental problems cannot be solved by one or a few countries. Instead, they should be solved with international effort. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#countries #effort
It is true that when facing environmental headaches, different countries should cooperate with each other, and aim to handle those worldwide questions, as well. Personally, I believe that it is through international effort that some environmental problems,
such
 as changes in climate, natural disasters, and nuclear pollution, are more likely to be solved,
while
 a single or a few states can
also
 make affects those questions which may impact many regions. With the development of globalisation, more and more people have noticed that environmental problem is worldwide, resulting from their big range of damage
as well as
 long-term solutions.
For example
, nuclear pollution will not only impact one country but affect many countries in the same area. Samely, the decline in air quality may damage the lives of people in many zones. What's more, the drought will impact many districts, which is disadvantageous to the farm and may cause a lack of food.
Besides
, it is only long-term effects, whether building some dams to provide water for farming or planting more trees to decline CO2 production and improve the quality of air, that can deal with those dilemmas. One or a few regions can do some effect on those troubles, like calling on effect to deal with the obstacle or organizing an environment protection organization, but what is important most, is the cooperation of all countries around the world.
Overall
, one or a few states could contribute to dealing with the environmental headache,
however
, only with international effort, can those issues be handled.
Submitted by li_ciyi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: