You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the difficulty that I am facing with my roommate. I am living in Room No 121 and using shared accommodation. The student with whom I am living is fond of
a
music and creating Remove the article
apply
Add an article
a distraction
distraction
. Fix the agreement mistake
distractions
Although
I have requested him multiple times to lower down
the volume of songs, he is not paying attention towards my query.
He is using the Change preposition
apply
loud speakers
to Correct your spelling
loudspeakers
listen
music and it is creating Add the preposition
tolisten
drastic
impact on my studies. As I have seen an exam schedule, my final exams are starting Add an article
a drastic
from
next week. I am able to prepare myself for Change preposition
apply
this
upcoming challenge as it requires a lot of focus. I have also
tried to study in our institution
garden but there is too much noise.
I would request you to provide meChange noun form
institution's
a
separate room Add the preposition
with a
along with
my classmate so that we can have
Unnecessary verb
apply
combine
Change the form of the verb
combined
studies
as well. If you can allot us a room away from the noisy park Correct pronoun usage
our studies
then
it will be more beneficial.
I will be highly thankful for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Khizar ShahidSubmitted by ned.khizar on
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