Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

some

people

say the

death

penalty

is not suitable for the modern world

while

others are requesting to governments give capital punishment for extremely violent

crimes

.

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there

are

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both advantages and disadvantages content in

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topic the positive impact may

very

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beneficial to our society rather

thinking

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than thinking

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of the negative impact. The

crime

rates are gradually increasing in the entire world and the majority of

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people

think the reason is governments are not giving strict punishments to those who involve in

a

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criminal activities.

Therefore

, especially criminals are not thinking twice before they commit

such

a

crime

as they know that punishments are not that tough and they keep on doing the same thing again and again.if capital punishment

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place

at

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any country the

crime

rates may reduce and

the

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innocent

people

can live their life peacefully without any fear.

for example

middle east

countries

have very strict rules for any kind of

crimes

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crime

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and most of the

countries

in the

mideast

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rank first in low

crime

rate index, The

people

who commit violent

crimes

will not

to

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hesitate

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do it again if they had given a second chance there if

death

panels in

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palace there will be no repeated acts and the

people

who planing to do

crimes

will get good examples and lessons before they commit that

crime

.

on the other

hand

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some

people

are extremely against the

death

penalty

as they believe that we are not living in the stone age and the

death

penalty

is no longer acceptable in the modern world, the disadvantage we can think about is specifically in third-world

countries

corrupted legal departments as money can change any kind of punishment in those

countries

.and

also

some times innocent peoples are ordered

death

penalty

due to

lack of money and power in some the

countries

. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the

death

penalty

is one of the major requirements to maintain

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peaceful and respectful society.