As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays we witness powerlessly the increasing number of

car

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cars

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and the consequential need to maintain the

road

systems

.

While

some people argue that the

government

should be responsible for

this

commitment, others believe that

drivers

should pay for

this

.

This

essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in

favor

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of the latter. On the one hand, the

state

plays an important role in managing the goods belonging to the community

handling

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and handling

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the resources coming from citizens. What’s more, when it comes

that

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something happens, not related to the

merely

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willingness of people but results from a combination of events, political or manufacturing

for

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instance, the

government

should assume the responsibility to help less privileged families.

For instance

, changes in the

car

industry (type, number, etc..) represent significant situations in which the

government

should act directly

putting

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money into the

road

systems

.

On the other hand

, some people argue that who

use

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the

car

is strictly connected to the covering of the costs concerning the

road

systems

.

This

philosophy comes from the deep conviction that the

state

should not interfere with everything

happens

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to the community. The

state

plays a crucial role in dealing with the main services to be provided to citizens and the

car

industry and whatever relates to

it

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own to the

drivers

.

For example

, the increasing demand for cars results from

drivers

. That means

,

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they are responsible for paying costs to keep the

road

systems

well performing and safe. In my opinion, the

state

should be co-responsible for

maintenance

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the maintenance

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of the

road

systems

since speaking of the

government

means basically discussing

about

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citizens

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contributions to the

state

budget. In conclusion, in the debate between those who think the

government

should spend money to handle the effects of the increasing of

numer

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number

of cars and the others that believe

drivers

should take the task to cover the costs, I am inclined to consider the

state

as co-responsible for the good maintenance of the

road

systems

.