The diagram illustrates the basic principles of a hydraulic dam.The process includes a large dam,powerhouse and long distance power lines.

The diagram illustrates the basic principles of a hydraulic dam.The process includes a large dam,powerhouse and long distance power lines.
The diagram depicts the Hydraulic
dam
process
as well as
the cultural ways of the hydraulic
dam
.
This
process goes through various equipment
such
as a
power
zone, Generator, and
Dam
.
Overall
, a concept is carried out with
power
transmission cables and take
water
from the
dam
, where the upstream and downstream
water
level exists and
electricity
generate in good amounts. The first step of
electricity
making starts with
Power
Transmission cables and it
also
introduces the Transformer, Next from Transformer goes into two elements the Powerhouse and Generator.
Power
households push the
water
into the generator and it helps to make the
electricity
, where the
water
goes into the outlet. Afterwards,
water
goes to the Downstream outlet, where Environment Canada is placed. After that,on the second ,side there are two elements Sluice gate and the Storage reservoir.It showing that the amount of difference between upstream and downstream
water
levels.
However
, it helps to generate a great amount of
electricity
.
Furthermore
,
dam
water
goes through Penstock and is mixed with the turbine.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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