Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get an university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is sometimes argued that having

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in

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university

is an ideal choice to become

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in career life,

while

others believe that

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belief is out-of-date. In

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paper, I would discuss both

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of view

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and present examples to show why the latter assertion is correct. Those who advocate for learning in

universities

argue that many companies require

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degree

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to apply for

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situations. For many leaders,

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is a standard of having enough academic knowledge for an employee, he

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to learn many subjects that nowhere has.

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, almost everyone

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their own

degree

in their

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field and

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to become a part of the workforce, so others who do not have degrees get some difficulties

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suitable jobs.

Moreover

,

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help

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the employee

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to have a job with a higher salary.

For example

, to work in A national company, you need to have a

degree

from a list of

universities

that they noticed.

On the other hand

, proponents of having better ways than getting

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university

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that joining vocational

trainings

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or becoming entrepreneurs to start

own

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business would be ideal. First and foremost, participating

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trainings

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takes a shorter time to graduate, so those who join these courses could find jobs and earn salaries sooner than their peers.

Nevertheless

, they could learn realistic knowledge that they could apply in the real life

instead

of learning academic

informations

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information

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from

universities

.

For instance

, learning course about electricity could show you how to

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electrical systems in only 2 years and your school could help you to find a suitable job. Another way would be to become a businessman and start his own business.

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people, they want to become

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so

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entrepreneur

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would be a better option. In conclusion, there are many different ways to be

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in

the

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life,

however

, I believe that getting

in

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universities

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university

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is not the only choice but joining vocational

trainings

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training

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or starting new businesses could be mentioned.