Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get an university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that having
academic
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an academic
the academic
course
in Fix the agreement mistake
courses
an
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a
university
is an ideal choice to become Add an article
a success
success
in career life, Replace the word
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while
others believe that this
belief is out-of-date. In this
paper, I would discuss both point
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points
in depth
and present examples to show why the latter assertion is correct.
Those who advocate for learning in Add a hyphen
in-depth
universities
argue that many companies require Correct article usage
a university's
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university
degree
to apply for Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
working
situations. For many leaders, Replace the word
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degree
is a standard of having enough academic knowledge for an employee, he Add an article
the degree
a degree
have
to learn many subjects that nowhere has. Change the verb form
has
Thus
, almost everyone have
their own Change the verb form
has
degree
in their preference
field and Replace the word
preferred
ready
to become a part of the workforce, so others who do not have degrees get some difficulties Add a missing verb
is ready
to find
suitable jobs. Change the verb form
finding
Moreover
, Correct article usage
a university's
university's
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university
degree
help Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
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the employee
an employee
employee
to have a job with a higher salary. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
For example
, to work in A national company, you need to have a degree
from a list of universities
that they noticed.
On the other hand
, proponents of having better ways than getting Change preposition
into an
an
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a
university
believe
that joining vocational Add the particle
to believe
trainings
or becoming entrepreneurs to start Change the wording
training
pieces of training
own
business would be ideal. First and foremost, participating Correct pronoun usage
their own
vocational
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in vocational
traninings
takes a shorter time to graduate, so those who join these courses could find jobs and earn salaries sooner than their peers. Correct your spelling
trainings
training
Nevertheless
, they could learn realistic knowledge that they could apply in the real life instead
of learning academic informations
from Change the wording
information
pieces of information
universities
. For instance
, learning course about electricity could show you how to installing
electrical systems in only 2 years and your school could help you to find a suitable job. Another way would be to become a businessman and start his own business. Change the form of the verb
install
For many
people, they want to become Change preposition
Many
finance
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financially
independence
so Replace the word
independent
become
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becoming
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an entrepreneur
entrepreneur
would be a better option.
In conclusion, there are many different ways to be Fix the agreement mistake
entrepreneurs
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a success
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successful
the
life, Correct article usage
apply
however
, I believe that getting in
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into
universities
is not the only choice but joining vocational Fix the agreement mistake
university
trainings
or starting new businesses could be mentioned.Change the wording
training
pieces of training
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