There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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to bring your attention to irregular
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services for the
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two weeks in the Kudasan area. I generally take the 8 AM
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to reach my workplace in Ahmedabad but often buses are not on time and are always overcrowded.
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to that, some buses do not stop near designated
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stoppages.
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this
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, passengers who board a
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do not find a place to seat and are forced to stand in the middle aisle with their heavy bags;
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, they feel exhausted throughout the day and their productivity decreases exponentially.
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, It is very risky to travel with excessive passengers than the specified limit.
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, I am requesting you add more buses to existing routes and direct them to be on time. If
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, there are any unwanted circumstances
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inform passengers very well in advance so they can arrange their own. I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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