The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, an increasing number of

people

are concerned about the efficient functioning of

society

.

However

, whether

society

is based on rules and

laws

has caused heated debate. I agree with the view that our

society

should build

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disciplines

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and

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that will

improves

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citizen’s

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life

quantity.

First,

it is clear that

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protects

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square deal for everyone. That means all

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are equivalent applies to the

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is

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their government designed at Morden time. Without

this

, the president could kill a citizen just because he

do

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not like

this

person just like ancient Roma. The

laws

, a mandatory rule, can hold the

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and

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regular of our

society

.

Moreover

, the

rules

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is

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a

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key

for

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normal

life

in many filed.

For example

, our country

have

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business law and industry

regular

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to limited big companies and the products how they make. If a country

do

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not have those

laws

, the

people

who lived in

this

country may not only

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food with extra toxic

,

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but

buying

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clothing which may

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skin

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allergy. So, the action of consumer goods

as

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based on

people

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life

, we must plan the law to make

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produce safely.

That is

not to say that we should not pay any attention to other factors,

such

as emotion, morality and family. Those elements

also

will influence the world’s development but they are not

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compulsory

require

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. So

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social

life

still

build

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at disciplines.

Finally

, the major function of rules should be

providing

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a

safety

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and fairly environment for

people

, thereby making the world function well. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other important roles which other keys undertake. Only by doing so can our

society

maintain dynamic and sustainable development.