The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of
people
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are concerned about the efficient functioning of
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.
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, whether
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is based on rules and
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has caused heated debate. I agree with the view that our
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should build
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disciplines
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and
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that will
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citizen’s
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life
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quantity.
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it is clear that
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it is the disciplines that
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square deal for everyone. That means all
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are equivalent applies to the
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their government designed at Morden time. Without
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, the president could kill a citizen just because he
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not like
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person just like ancient Roma. The
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, a mandatory rule, can hold the
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and
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regular of our
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.
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, the
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is
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a
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key
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normal
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in many filed.
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, our country
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business law and industry
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to limited big companies and the products how they make. If a country
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not have those
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, the
people
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who lived in
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country may not only
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food with extra toxic
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but
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the
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clothing which may
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skin
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allergy. So, the action of consumer goods
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the
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based on
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people
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life
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, we must plan the law to make
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produce safely.
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not to say that we should not pay any attention to other factors,
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as emotion, morality and family. Those elements
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will influence the world’s development but they are not
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compulsory
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. So
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social
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still
build
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at disciplines.
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, the major function of rules should be
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a
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and fairly environment for
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, thereby making the world function well. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other important roles which other keys undertake. Only by doing so can our
society
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maintain dynamic and sustainable development.
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