Some people think that children of busy parents should be sent to day-care centres, while others believe that they should be cared for by their grandparents.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two different views on who should take

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of

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whose parents are busy, one is that they should be looked after by

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and the other is that they should be looked after by

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. In my opinion, I think it is best for the

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.On the one hand, some people say that these

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should be taken

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of by their

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, the

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will be able to bond with their

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, as they will have more time to spend with them, and the

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will be able to share their life stories with the

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so that they can get to know them better.

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, the

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will be cared for more carefully because the

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will have more time and energy to spend on the

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and the

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will be cared for like a parent.

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, other people believe that these

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should be cared for by

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centres

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, the

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in

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can be cared for in a more professional way, because the staff in

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are trained to treat the

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in a timely and correct manner,

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in case of accidental injury.

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, the child's social skills can be enhanced because there are many

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from other families at the

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who can play and learn together.

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,in my view , I prefer

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to take

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of the

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whose parents are busy.

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the

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get professional

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and social skills at the

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, they are missing a crucial thing which is family affection which is very important for the

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's mental health in the long term. In conclusion,I think

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are better suited to take

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of

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than

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centres

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