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There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Manager of the
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 company, I hope
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 email finds you well, I have not found any
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 in my area which is the Bandora over two weeks. You always passed
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near my house in Bandora when I go to my University previously.
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 happened and affect my income because I catch the tax overtime when I go to my college.
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, my children cannot go their school because they use the
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. So my wife goes with them at
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 time. She left her job permanently. If you have any issue like
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damage in your
bus
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, I suggest you come to my area again because many people got damaged by your change in
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 region. And you can increase your budget a short time after fixing your problems . People can pay
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 because of
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 issue. I look to hearing from you, I can read your suggestion, Best Wishes, Hisham
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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