The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the global sales of the top five mobile phone brands, namely Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, and ZTE between 2009 and 2013.
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, ZTE brand mobile phone has a steady movement from 2009 until 2013 with an average sales of 40 Linking Words
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